Comment on the best bits: Dynamic, moving fast, and just beginning to have some narrative because of the man in black being around.
Things you can improve: Get all these elements in place. The gunshot doesn't make much impact. You need to work on structure.
Marks are out of 3 for this:
0 means you haven't done it.
1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.
CAMERA
Medium Shot MS 2
Long Shot LS 2
Close Up CU 1
XLS - extreme long shot 1
XCU - extreme close up 1
Pan 3
Tilt 2
Zoom 3
Cross focus 0
Deep focus 0
Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2
Point of View - POV 1
Use of tripod 2
EDIT
Shot - reverse shot 2
Establishing shot 2
Cut 2
Dissolve 2
Total out of 54 = 28 = 52% = D
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